第六部分 历年真题作文演练（00-07年）
五、2000年
Directions:
Study the following two pictures carefully and write an essay to
1. Describe the pictures.
2. Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the pictures, and
3. Suggest counter-measures.
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET II.
看到这两幅图画描绘的鱼的现状
第一段： 描述图片-商业性捕捞技术越先进，船只越来越多，鱼得数量则驯熟减少甚至不少鱼已经从地球上绝迹。如果任凭此种状况继续下去，自然资源危机在所难免，人类的生存也濒临危机。
第一段提纲：
TS：The increase of advanced commercial fishing has resulted in the decrease of fish.
A. In 1900: simple fishing boats, plenty of fish
B. In 1995: advanced commercial fishing-ships, much less fish
第一段初稿：
1. From the pictures we can see that the increase of advanced commercial fishing has resulted in the decrease of fish.
2. In 1900, there was a large quantity of fish.
3. And in 1995 only one was left there.
4. If such a case goes on, we may have no fish to eat very soon.
第一段修改稿：
1. From the pictures we can see that during the 20th century the increase of advanced
commercial fishing resulted in a sharp decrease of fish.
2. With only a few simple sailing-vessels fishing in 1900, there were plenty of fish.
3. But to 1995, with the working of more advanced commercial fishing-ships, fish
remained much less.
4. If such a case goes on, fish is to be extinct from the world and we will have none to eat in no time.
初稿只用最简单的句子描述了两幅图大概情况，但不够详细，且句子之间缺乏逻辑衔接。修改稿1）句加during the 20th century限定全文讨论的a sharp decrease of fish所发生的时间跨度。3）句该为but以对比百年变化。 文都教育在线：http://www.wendu.com
第二段：Deduce the drawer’s purpose in the pictures. 人类想要在地球上继续生存，不但要合理利用资源，更要保护资源，决不能在促进科技、文明发展的同时盲目地利用高科技对自然资源盲目掠夺。
第二段提纲：
TS：There is something more than the pictures themselves.
A. Fish is limited and so are many other resources in nature.
B. Since and technology should be applied properly.
第二段初稿：
1. The comic pictures set us thinking more about the whole nature.
2. Fish, like all other natural resources, is limited.
3. And it’s dangerous for man to fish excessively without paying attention to the
decrease of fish.
4. Furthermore, we should protect fish for the sake of ourselves.
第二段修改稿：
1. Studying further, we will obtain more from the cartoon pictures.
2. First, all natural resources, such as fish, are limited. Second, even with modern
science and technology, man should not overuse the natural resources just for enormous private interests.
3. Last but not the least, protecting natural resources has become one of our
immediate key tasks now.
本段重点在于挖掘深意。初稿罗列猜测。修改稿尝试使用一定句套，避免口语化，尤其应该突出层次，拿下结构分。
第三段：Suggest your counter measures.根据题目要求，本段任务是针对过度的商业性捕捞提出措施。应该既献良策又突出英语才华，结束全文。呼吁全球一起努力保护自然
第三段提纲：
TS：Ways as many as possible can be found and carried out if we are determined to protect our mother nature.
A. The commercial fishing is restricted.
B. Raising fish accompanies a lot of effective measures.
第三段初稿：
1. To protect fish, we must take some measures and we should find ways as many as
possible and carry them out to protect our mother nature.
2. First of all, we can make some laws to force the commercial fishers to fish only in
certain areas or in certain seasons, or to pay high taxes.
3. And if they break the law, they should be severely fined, confiscated or put into prison.
4. Besides, we should also raise more fish while fishing.
5. If people all over the world can take collective efforts, we will have fish forever.
第三段修改稿：
1. In my opinion, many ways can be found and fish-protecting measures should be carried out if we are determined. 文都教育在线：http://www.wendu.com
2. For example, the commercial fishing should be fined by law to certain species in certain areas and seasons while fish must be raised at the same time.
3. Otherwise, the fisher should be fined, confiscated or put into prison.
4. With all the countries contributing as much to the protection of natural resources, man can have adequate natural resources for a permanent use.
初稿开门见山贝克汉姆自传，主动采取措施，衔接尚可，但是整段语气态度不够坚定有力。修改稿采用一定句套和被动语态等技巧，呼吁全球共同努力，上升到一个高度。
六、2001年
画图作文
Directions:
Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it.
There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to
1） show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,
2） give a specific example, and
3） give your suggestion as to the best way to show love.
You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points）
画图作文题目往往给出图片、简单汉语、写作要求等三方面指示。考生应充分利用三方面信息。在试卷指导一开始就指出“Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest.”汉语也指明 “爱心是一盏灯” ，因此断定油灯象征“爱”，那么对黑夜中一盏灯稍加描述，再扩大到爱在世界范围的作用，这就是第一段的内容了。灯-爱-灯与黑暗的关系-爱与世界的关系，充分利用现成的feeling, noblest, symbolic meaning 等。
第二段按照指令要举个例子，印证“爱”这盏灯的作用。范文将以希望工程为例，交代贫困地区儿童失学现状-预测由此产生的结果-希望工程的意义。
第三段谈谈自己的建议。如果呼吁“人人都献出一点爱” 一定能在该卷老师心中引起共鸣。开门见山提出建议-简短评价。
第一段提纲：
Love symbolized as oil-lamp
- Oil-lamp:
A. sending out light, lighting up night
B. the darker the sky, the brighter the lamp
- Love:
A. warming up cold world
B. the colder the world, the warmer the love will become
第一段初稿：
(1) Love is symbolized by an oil-lamp in the picture.
(2) The oil-lamp sends out light and lightens the night sky.
(3) The darker the sky is, the brighter the oil-lamp is.
(4) Similarly, love warms up the world.
(5) The colder the world is., the warmer the love will be.
第一段修改稿：
(1) Recently there has been a discussion regarding the issue of love in the newspaper.
(2) Love is symbolized in the picture by an oil-lamp that sends out light, lightening the night sky.
(3) The darker the sky is, the brighter the oil-lamp seems to grow.
(4) Similarly, love, the noblest feeling of mankind, warms up the cold world.
(5) The colder the world is, the warmer love seems to be.
1. regarding=about=concerning
2. 将初稿中1-2句合并为一个带定语从句的简单复合句，并且lightening the night sky 代替了初稿lightens the night sky.这样，句型有了新的变化。
3. 第三句添加seems to grow比初稿the brighter the oil-lamp is 更加有余地。
4. 第四句love 之后插入the noblest feeling of mankind,充分利用指令语言，但是句型变化十分清新。
第二段提纲：
Specific example: Project Hope
- Poor children can’t go to school
- Effect
A. a lack of human resources
B. economic development held back
In this way Project Hope initiated.
第二段初稿：
(1) A specific example is the Project Hope.
(2) Some children from the poor areas can’t go to school.
(3) There will be a lack of human resources.
(4) And the country’s economic development will be held back.
(5) Therefore, the Project Hope is initiated.
第二段修改稿：
(1) a specific example is the Project Hope.
(2) As is the case in some poverty-stricken rural areas of China, few school-agers can afford to go to school because of lack of financial support.
(3) The effect is both immediate and far-reaching upon China.
(4) As far as the present is concerned, the country will soon see a lack of human resources.
(5) For the distant impact, the country’s economic development will be held back.
(6) Therefore, the Project Hope is initiated to offer financial assistance to the poor children.
(7) Then, all of a sudden, there appears in the black sky an “oil-lamp”, casting light, spreading love, planting hope.
第三段提纲：
My suggestion: Everyone offers love. The world will be filled with love.
第三段初稿“
(1) I suggest that everyone offer his or her love.
(2) The world will be filled with love.
第三段修改稿：
(1) As to the best way to show love, I suggest that everyone of us “ask not what others will do for you, but what you can do for the others.”
(2) By so doing, I sincerely believe each corner of the world will be lit up by the oil-lamp.
结尾注意回顾主题。
1． 第一句As to…是对指令的巧妙抄袭利用。
2． 引号部分是肯尼迪就职演说对民众的号召。原话如下：Ask not what America will do for you, but what together we can do for the freedom of man. 文都教育在线：http://www.wendu.com
3． 最后一句避开love回到oil-lamp, light up, world三个关键词贝克汉姆 新华医院，使文章升华。
七、2002年
study the following picture carefully and write an essay entitled "CulturesNational and International".
In the essay you should
1） describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and
2） give your comment on the phenomenon.
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEEF 2.（20 points）
An American girl in traditional Chinese costume
主题：中西文化交融
第一段：描述图片
第二段：加以评论
第一段提纲：
The Chinese national culture has been accepted by the international society.
A: The fitness of the costume
B. The traditional Chinese costume stands for our national culture; the case of the American girl is of universal significance.
第一段初稿：
(1) As is shown by the picture, we can see an American girl with a traditional Chinese costume.
(2) The traditional Chinese costume fits well on her.
(3) The traditional Chinese costume stands for our national culture.
(4) The case of the beautiful smiling American girl represents the international culture.
(5) The implied meaning is that the traditional Chinese culture has been accepted by the international society.
第一段修改稿：
(1) As is know by the picture, we can see an American girl who is wearing a suit of traditional Chinese costume.
(2) With a smile on her face, she looks beautiful and the traditional Chinese costume fits well on her.
(3) Studying further, we will obtain more meanings.
(4) In the first place, the traditional Chinese costume stands for our national culture.
(5) In the second place, the case of the American girl, who comes from a totally different culture, but appears to be satisfied with the traditional Chinese costume, is of universal significance.
(6) What the picture implies is that the traditional Chinese culture, which is characterized by our national spirit, has been accepted by the international society.
第二段提纲：
Our national culture can be accepted by the whole world when its distinctive features are fully expressed.
A. Our national culture is deeply rooted in our tradition.
B. We should extend our influence on the world by carrying forward our national culture with its distinctive features.
第二段初稿：
(1) When our national culture has presented its distinctive features, it can be accepted by the whole world.
(2) Since China is a large country with a long history of five thousand years, and our ancestors have developed her splendid culture, our national culture is deeply rooted in our tradition.
(3) We should extend its influence on the world by carrying it forward.
(4) In this way, our national culture can be on its ways to the world and be naturally and internationally accepted.
第二段修改稿：
(1) It is clear that our national culture can be accepted by the world when its distinctive features are fully expressed.
(2) China is a large country with a long history of five thousand years, and our ancestors have developed her splendid national culture.
(3) So our national culture, which represents our national spirit, is deeply rooted in our tradition.
(4) As a developing country with an ancient civilization and her splendid national culture, China should make greater contributions to human beings.
(5) Therefore, it is imperative for us to extend our influence on the world by carrying forward our national culture with its distinctive cultures.
(6) Only in this way can our national culture be on its way to the world and be naturally and internationally accepted.
八、2003年
Directions: Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should
1) describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and
2) point out its implications in our life.
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points）
温室花朵经不起考验
看图作文：把图画中反映的所有信息转换成书面文字贝克汉姆 上海，间或做出相应评论。
要求：观察力，想象力，分辨综合出作文主题及内涵和某种哲理
1、 描述解释图画
2、 指出暗含意义
图画：温室，花朵娇艳，尽管风暴袭来，由于温室保护，花朵依然绽放。
失去了温室，暴风雨袭击下花朵残败，脆弱的生命消逝。
意义：随着计划生育政策进一步实施，许多“小皇帝”“小公主”涌现，衣来伸手饭来张口，如温室花朵经不起风浪。
第一段提纲：描述解释图画
Nowadays, there have been an increasing number of “Young Plants” in the greenhouse in our society.
A. the flowers in full blossom
B. the flowers disappearing into uselessness to the society
第一段初稿：
(1) There are a number of “Young Plants” in the greenhouse.
(2) The flowers in the first drawing are in blossom, perfection, and freshness in the greenhouse-the comfortable circumstances.
(3) When a snowstorm comes, the flowers are spiritless without the protection of greenhouse. 文都教育在线：http://www.wendu.com
(4) They disappear into useless to the society.
第一段修改稿：
(1) Nowadays there have been an increasing number of “Young Plants” in the greenhouse in our society-the weak unable to stand difficulties and hardships around them.
(2) As can be seen from the drawings, these flowers are in full blossom, great perfection, and lovely freshness in the greenhouse.
(3) However, when a storm approaches, these beautiful, energetic flowers are taken the bloom off once they have no protection from greenhouse.
(4) They lower their heads.
(5) They lose their ever-brilliance.
(6) Little by little, they disappear into uselessness to the society.
第二段提纲：指出暗含意义
The winter plum trees have the snow and exude pleasant fragrance.
A. A person experiencing trials and sufferings can survive.
B. The “Young Plants” in the greenhouse eventually disappear into uselessness to the society.
第二段初稿：
(1) The winter plum trees brave the storm and exude pleasant fragrance.
(2) When a person experiences all sorts of trials and sufferings, he can survive the blows of storms or misfortunes.
(3) A good many young children in China are “Little Emperors” or “Princesses” of families.
(4) Their parents have done what they will do.
(5) They are those fragile flowers in the greenhouse.
(6) Once they meet with some setbacks, they will feel frustrated and thus lose heart.
(7) So we should not become the weak plants in the greenhouse, but the plum trees in the depth of winter.
第二段修改稿：
(1) As the proverb goes, the winter plum trees brave the snowstorm and exude pleasant fragrance.
(2) In the same way, only when a person experiences all sorts of trials and sufferings can he survive the blows of storm or misfortunes, and eventually establish himself firmly in society.
(3) Take for example a good many young children in China, who are spoiled by their parents, they are little Emperors or Princesses in the family.
(4) Their parents have done whatever they should do.
(5) They have only to open their mouth to be fed and hold out their hands to be dressed, almost with everything provided.
(6) Actually, they are those fragile flowers in the greenhouse.
(7) Once they meet with some setbacks, they will feel frustrated and thus lose their heart inevitably, which may well lead to tragedy of some kind.
(8) So we should not become the weak plants in the greenhouse, but the plum trees in the depth of winter, the spirit of which is firm and indomitable.
九、2004年
Directions:
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
1) describe the drawing,
2) interpret its meaning, and
3) support your view with examples.
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points）
终点又是新的起点
As the picture given above depicts, a runner, summoning up his last ounce of strength, is dashing to the finishing line, hot sweat rolling from his forehead. He is overjoyed to have won the race. Besides, on both sides of the finishing line there are two big words in Chinese: Scratch and Finish.
What does the author of the drawing intend to tell us? In my opinion, by the picture he means that what one has achieved so far is merely a new starting point for what he is going to do next.
There are a lot of examples to support my view. The most obvious one is the discovery of the radioactive element radium, which means the successful result of Curie’s research work. Yet it is just a good beginning of the scientific study on atomic energy. Let take another example to illustrate the view. We have achieved great success in rural reforms, which has greatly raised the living standards of farmers in the country. But it serves only as the starting point for pushing forward urban reforms in a comprehensive way. A third example is the successful return of Shenzhou 5 spaceship, which marks the triumphant end of the launch. At the same time it has created a new era for China’s space exploration. In conclusion, it seems obvious that the finish of a thing signifies a new scratch of another one. （235 words）
十、2005 年
Directions: Write an essay of 160 –200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points）
养老“足球赛”
尊敬老人是中华民族长期持有的传统美德。然而
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这幅画使我想起我曾听到过的有关老人一人死在家里而他的子女都没有注意到的许多故事。所有那些故事说明了今天社会中一种常见的现象：许多孩子长大了却不愿赡养年老的双亲。他们尽情取乐，而他们的父母却无人照管，甚至无人理睬，饱尝孤独的痛苦。时间已使他们的父亲步履蹒跚，艰苦的劳动已使他们驼背。可子女们却对此视而不见，听而不闻。我认为，他们已经丧失了责任感，背叛了良心。迟早他们将会受到社会的鄙视和批评。
中国有句老话说，亡羊补牢，犹未为晚。必须马上开展一个运动来提高年轻一代的道德品质。而同时，年轻人应该意识到，总有一天他们也会变老，或许他们也会受到同样的对待。
Respecting the elders is a long-held, traditional Chinese virtue. However, this drawing depicts a saddening situation: the eldest son is kicking out his hunchbacked, helpless father, while the other two sons and a daughter, all decently dressed, are rolling up their sleeves to keep the goals, preventing the old man （from） entering their homes.
This drawing reminds me of numerous other stories I have heard of （=about） how an old man died alone in his house, without being noticed by his children. All those have illustrated a common phenomenon in our society today: many grown-up children refuse to support their aging parents. While they indulge themselves in delights of leisure, their parents are neglected, or even ignored, tasting the bitterness of loneliness. They turn blind eyes to the fact that time has slowed their parents’ steps and much hard labor has bent their backs. I think they have lost their sense of responsibility and betrayed their own conscience. Sooner or later, they will find themselves exposed to social contempt and criticism.
As a Chinese proverb goes, it is not too late to mend the fold even after the sheep is lost. An immediate campaign should be launched to enhance the young generation’s morality. In the meanwhile, the youngsters should realize that one day they will also become old and they may be treated in the same way. （221 words）
十一、2006 年
Directions: Study the follow photos carefully and write an essay in which you should
1.describe the photo briefly
2. interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and
3. give your point of view
有两幅图片，图1 把崇拜写在脸上；图2 花300元做“小贝头”
注：Beckham是英国足球明星
以上的照片生动地显示出来，相貌英俊的英国足球巨星贝克汉姆在年轻人中广受欢迎。在第一张照片中，贝克汉姆的名字出现在一个年轻人的额头上克鲁斯 贝克汉姆，文字表明：对偶像的崇拜写在了脸上。在第二张照片中，这个年轻人正在理发店中做贝克汉姆的时髦发型。我们得到的信息是他正花300元来模仿偶像的发式。
毫无疑问，照片巧妙地反映了这样一个社会现象，偶像崇拜目前在青年人中非常盛行。贝克汉姆代表了体育界英雄的形象，他的英俊外表以及高超的球技正是球迷们热情追捧的。同样，2005年中国举办的“超级女生”大赛中，几个十几岁的女孩一夜成名，这个事件激起了全国性的争论，围绕着崇拜这些偶像的意义和危害。总之，青年人往往容易崇拜那些在外表、才华和特长方面极其出色的人。
在我看来，偶像崇拜这个发人深思的社会现象，其实是把双刃剑，可以深刻影响青年人成长。如果我们只是靠模仿偶像发型或追逐时尚的方式来崇拜他们，这种痴迷将必定浪费我们大量的金钱和时间，影响我们的工作效率。相反，如果我们靠弥补我们和榜样之间的差距来努力提高自己，我们就会过一种积极和收获显著的生活。因此，我们应当采取后面一种态度来指引我们的人生。
As is vividly depicted in the photos above, Beckham, the handsome British football superstar, is enjoying a striking popularity among young people. In the first photo, Beckham’s name appears on a young man’s face. The caption indicates that worship for the idol is written on the face. In the second photo, this young man is doing Beckham’s chic hairstyle in a barbershop. We are informed that he is spending 300 yuan imitating his idol’s hairdo.
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